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Crying, Waiting, Hoping
Crying, Waiting, Hoping
albc28


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Beatles Song/Lyrics (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S2 IS
Location: My bathroom in New Jersey
Date: May 27, 2006
Aperture: 3.2
ISO: 50
Shutter: 0.8
Galleries: Black and White, Self Portrait
Date Uploaded: May 30, 2006

Taken in the bathtub using the self timer. Shot originally in color, but changed to black and white

Statistics
Place: 164 out of 273
Avg (all users): 5.2948
Avg (commenters): 6.3571
Avg (participants): 4.8854
Avg (non-participants): 5.5233
Views since voting: 1262
Views during voting: 439
Votes: 268
Comments: 17
Favorites: 0


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09/09/2006 02:06:07 AM
I'll go with what ericwoo said below, but mostly I want to comment that this is a very emotional pose. And retreating to the sanctity of your bathroom when your heart's broken seems natural enough. Nice job!
08/22/2006 06:01:43 PM
love the black and white it is a very good shot. Hope you don't have to wait to long
06/09/2006 02:10:31 AM
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: Nice focus and excellent depth of field. Self-portraits are always difficult, even when everything is going well. Focus is normally the main challenge, but you overcame that well.

Lighting: You did a pretty good job with the lighting in a tough, indoor situation, but your conversion made it a little flat. There are no harsh shadows and no areas of overexposure. Try to include specific editing steps in your photographer's comments. It helps us out when making suggestions in the critique. I am assuming that you just desaturated the image into grayscale. If you are using Photoshop or elements, try using a Hue/Saturation later, the channel mixer or even LAB color. If you have any questions, feel free to shoot me a PM.

Composition/Content: Excellent, and your capture is interesting and creative. The angle you chose for your composition helps the image flow very well to the viewer's eye.

My Opinion: You did a very nice job with both creating a self-portrait and meeting the challenge. With a little more contrast and a slightly better tonal range, this one would have finished even better.

Eric
 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/06/2006 04:22:06 PM
seems a little too staged, too much wall
06/06/2006 06:16:20 AM
Great eternal hug and juxtaposed emmotion,big guy small bath cornered by his feelings.cant decide wether a tighter crop would have detracted from the mise en scene? I think it might.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/05/2006 07:24:53 PM
You da man, man!
06/05/2006 12:47:41 AM
artistic and emotive
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/03/2006 09:03:44 PM
Very nice emotive shot. My first reaction was "Awwww..."
06/03/2006 09:51:55 AM
Interesting that you chose the bathtub for this image. I think the photo would benefit from a little levels and contrast work. I also think there is too much negative space on the top and upper left. A different crop might have made the image more dynamic. Good luck. 5
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/02/2006 10:47:20 PM
Nice composition. Nice lighting. A little soft, but that works in this instance. Emotive!
TC
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/02/2006 02:01:39 AM
He looks forlorn - he crawled off to sleep in the bath...(Norwegian Wood) nicely done!
06/01/2006 12:23:40 AM
what can I say...this is beautiful.
05/31/2006 04:38:56 PM
I really like this picture...it's simple and grabs you but it also leaves you missing something...it's too clean and set up
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/31/2006 03:19:21 PM
Semi-Naked man! Ahhhhhhh!
05/31/2006 12:47:24 PM
I wish the man was a bit more in focus, or the picture of the couple... the wall seems to be focused a bit more so. Still, great idea.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/31/2006 05:31:17 AM
NOTE.... I'm looking at the image first and tyrying to guess the title. If I can't guess, I can't give high marks :-(

pwerful image, shows pain and longing. didn't guess the song or luyric, but worthy of many marks
05/31/2006 12:24:12 AM
This is just strange to me...not sure why this guy's in a bathtub with a framed photo...


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