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06/09/2006 11:54:46 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
I read your comments and before I would have sworn this was a huge statue in a cavern with some sort of natural light.
Composition:
I'm going to have to agree with Shutterpug, I want to see more of it and I think portrait orientation would have been a better choice.
Subject:
Nothing distracting me from the subject. That's always good :-)
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
I'm gonna go ahead and say the technicals are all good. I perhaps would go with just a bit deeper DoF, but otherwise nice.
To grow its vote?:
To be honest, this looks very much like natural light in a challenge that called for "artificial" light. I think that may have worked against you. But it was good work on your part.
Summary:
I love it. I need to get one of those. It's cool.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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06/02/2006 04:41:11 PM |
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05/31/2006 02:19:30 PM |
| I really like how the lighting brings out the intricate details of this sculpture. I would have like to see more of this - maybe in portriat mode. |
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