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06/09/2006 02:49:35 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Very nice focus and a terrific depth of field. The perfect point of your subject is nicely isolated from the background using great colors along with the great depth of field.
Lighting: Your subject is well lit, but the shadow/highlight contrast of the background is a bit distracting. Perhaps shifting your position a bit or waiting for a different time of day would have helped out.
Composition/Content: Your chosen composition is a great strength. The rusted iron provides a very nice leading line that pulls the eye right into the main focus of the image. The great depth of field keeps the eye on what is most important inside the frame.
My Opinion: Nice work meeting the challenge, as well as producing an image that is a good deal better than the 5.28 that it scored.
Eric
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06/06/2006 04:23:42 PM |
i like the perspective and originality, but photo a little boring |
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06/06/2006 05:25:40 AM |
Lovely concept well observed and unpredicatable. |
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06/05/2006 08:47:04 AM |
Rusty metal thing... Nice. |
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06/03/2006 12:20:18 PM |
My favorite for matching the theme! |
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06/03/2006 09:36:55 AM |
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06/02/2006 04:49:40 PM |
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06/02/2006 12:33:32 AM |
Good eye for discovering this interesting shot. |
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06/01/2006 10:48:40 PM |
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06/01/2006 02:00:31 PM |
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06/01/2006 06:18:24 AM |
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05/31/2006 09:33:37 PM |
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05/31/2006 07:20:05 PM |
Creative! Next time I'd remove the spider web though. |
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05/31/2006 05:21:38 PM |
Nice tones in the metal and nice contrasts with the green background. The cob webs are a little distracting though as is the shadow line in the background.
TC |
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05/31/2006 02:33:20 PM |
Nice shot. Nice DOF. Nice use of subject and title. When I saw the thumbnail, I thought "Where did he get an octopus from?" |
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05/31/2006 10:38:08 AM |
Nice concept. Great DOF. Cobweb is a distraction though. |
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05/31/2006 07:46:40 AM |
Nice depth of field but more contrast would be good. Accidentaly, I'm listening to the song right now. Clever idea. |
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05/31/2006 12:57:18 AM |
I think it needs more focus. clever idea. |
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