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06/09/2006 07:57:28 AM |
Hi from the Critique Club!
Well done on scoring so high with your first challenge entry:))
This is a simple, crisp, clean image; elements that always go down well with the voters.
The black background is ideal for showcasing the spools. However I think that the big expanse on the right is too big and keeps pulling the eye over to that area, trying to dominate the image. It feels like something is missing, that something should be there. The space is nearly equal in size to the space taken up by your subject, and divides the image in half. If you took away nearly half the negative space or used portrait instead of landscape, it would perhaps enhance your image even more.
The lighting has caught the silk thread just right, helping the colours to be luminous, whilst still managing to capture the details.
You have chosen the colours well as they blend well together and none stand out from the rest, creating nice harmony and balance.
You have used the classic triangle composition to your advantage, creating a pleasing composition, and the focus is spot on.
A really pleasing image. |
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06/05/2006 08:22:04 PM |
| I like the colors and composition. The lighting works nicely as well. |
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06/05/2006 07:21:41 PM |
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06/05/2006 01:51:02 PM |
| Nice idea with the colours... |
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06/05/2006 05:02:26 AM |
| nice composition and study |
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06/04/2006 07:10:32 PM |
| I don't feel the space on the right adds anything to the shot. Would definetly prefer a vertical crop. Nice shot though with pretty color and nice light. |
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06/01/2006 09:36:37 AM |
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06/01/2006 03:26:35 AM |
| Nice sharp focus on all but the pink thread. Details demonstrated well by the angle the light casts upon the spools. I like all the colors - except for the pink as I've never been a pink person myself. |
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06/01/2006 12:21:38 AM |
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05/31/2006 07:20:18 PM |
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05/31/2006 06:56:07 PM |
| beautiful colors! bump 10 |
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