::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Hey look, I finally get to critique one for my pal :-) My first impression was that it is very touching and nicely colored and composed.
Composition:
I like the square crop. If I were to change it any, I'd move the grave down to almost touching the bottom of the photo.
Subject:
I think it stands out well from the background. Maybe a little less deep DoF would have helped some but not too much, I think a lot of bokah in the background would have been really distracting.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
All good. I don't think I'd change anything technically on this photo.
To grow its vote?:
Voters suck, we know that ;-) It's a good shot and IMO a bit under-rated. It has emotion and thought in it.
Summary:
I like it. Ofcourse you knew that. But, keep up the good work.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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