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Challenge: Take Two (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Olympus C-740UZ
Location: Lowell Ma Downtown
Date: Jun 1, 2006
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 10/300
Galleries: Abstract
Date Uploaded: Jun 1, 2006

Taken at a different angle. Taken on cloudy early evening
cropped and changed brightness

Statistics
Place: 157 out of 161
Avg (all users): 4.3548
Avg (commenters): 4.7500
Avg (participants): 4.0769
Avg (non-participants): 4.5556
Views since voting: 715
Views during voting: 224
Votes: 155
Comments: 5
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
06/13/2006 03:15:50 PM
Hey there from the Critique Club

This capture is definitely better than the original entry, but it is still far too small. Try [url=//www.dpchallenge.com/tutorial.php?TUTORIAL_ID=26 ]THIS LINK[/url]. I think that it will help you pull much higher scores on future challenges. I can see that there is a tremendous amount of detail in this capture, but I cannot see where the main focus is located, I cannot determine how deep the depth of field is, nor can I get a good enough feel for the lighting to give an adequate critique. Always, always, always take advantage of the full dimension parameters that DPC allows. Read through that tutorial. I believe you will be happily surprised with your next entry.

Eric
 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/12/2006 11:19:37 PM
This is unfortunately way to small.
06/10/2006 11:59:43 PM
I would like to see this bigger as the details have me intrigued. I think if you tried this at a different angle...eliminating the entire background and maybe closer than this would do really well. But still a 7 from me.
06/08/2006 08:55:35 AM
I prefer larger photos. You only use 300x350 while you could use 548x640.
This makes it hard to see details. I don't see what is in this box.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/06/2006 07:09:55 AM
I almost don't know what to say. It's just so uninteresting and well looks like a snapshot of nothing.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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