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08/26/2003 10:29:28 AM |
| I see what the idea is, but something is missing. I think the lighting should either make the color pop, or there need to be some more elements here to provide more visual appeal. The composition is pretty static too, basically, just a line through the middle of the frame. That could work, but it really doesn't here |
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08/23/2003 06:32:27 PM |
| This photo is not very clear. The colors are a bit dull. |
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08/23/2003 12:56:31 PM |
| the idea is there, but i don't think it was well executed. the watermelon seems to be slightly blurred and the background is very sterile. |
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08/23/2003 06:19:27 AM |
| May be better layed corner to corner and you have some vignetting. |
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08/22/2003 09:48:23 PM |
| Nice composition here. The white space above and below help the watermelon stand out and help emphasize its colors. It would be better if the entire subject was in focus and the shadows were eliminated (especially the ones in the corners). |
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08/22/2003 04:16:26 PM |
| i'd position it diagonally |
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08/22/2003 02:06:15 PM |
| I would love to see the whole slice of watermelon. The part that is showing doesn't give it a nice composition. |
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08/20/2003 01:27:28 AM |
| I like the subject and the abstractness of putting it on a white background. The focus is not very sharp, though, and the colors are a bit dull. |
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