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06/12/2006 04:29:13 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: I like the crisp focus on the lamp. It works well to pull the eye right into the image. I would like to see a bit deeper depth of filed to include some of the floor detail in the foreground.
Lighting: I also like the lighting. I do find the lone highlight on the left side of the image a bit distracting. The rest of the image is nicely lit.
Composition/Content: Nice composition. The lines of the blinds as well as your shadows work well with the focus to pull the viewer's eye into the frame.
My Opinion: I think that you met the challenge well, but you were lacking the needed pop to separate this image from the rest. I believe that the voters found that the challenge was met, but the content was a bit too commonplace.
Eric
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06/11/2006 11:30:09 PM |
| A good day to quit. Would have liked the single reflection on the wall to have been cropped out. |
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06/10/2006 11:02:32 PM |
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06/09/2006 03:38:07 PM |
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06/09/2006 07:43:58 AM |
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06/07/2006 09:19:07 AM |
| what to say ? the photo could be better if take from another angle for sure |
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06/06/2006 09:23:45 PM |
| Nice angle. It's hard to feel the emptiness of the room because such a small part of it is shown. |
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06/06/2006 06:33:41 AM |
| nice idea, but find the composition a bit dull. |
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06/05/2006 05:08:32 PM |
| Shot from too low of an angle for my tastes, I am not fond of the OOF floor in the foreground. But not too bad overall, good lighting, very clear, nice tones. |
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06/05/2006 04:58:19 PM |
| a little more of the blinds,would have increased the impact,IMO |
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06/05/2006 05:10:31 AM |
| Amazing - I almost used a shisha as my prop - I'm amazed to see someone else with the same idea - after all they're not really common or garden items! |
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06/05/2006 02:54:09 AM |
| someow there seems to be too much floor space perhaps the pipeshould come further forward ? 5 |
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06/05/2006 01:18:38 AM |
| As described on QVC: "Now this little item is ideal for a toke bag..." ;) |
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