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07/12/2006 05:04:44 AM |
| Wow! This is simply wonderful. The dash of scarlet makes it even more interesting. Framing and lighting is just fine. The photo is overexposed or blown out at points, but it fits the overall composition. The focus seems to be little soft though. |
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06/11/2006 11:21:37 PM |
| A marvelous composition. Wonderful perspective and pose. Subtle use of selective desat. The only defect is the face is slightly out of focus, but perfect otherwise. |
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06/11/2006 10:00:14 PM |
| So, "Jasmine" is one "thing" - nice thing, I would say, think her expression is too constructed, but I do like the picture, color composition and lighting. |
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06/11/2006 09:58:41 PM |
| A nice basic compilation but it looks a little blown on the highlights on her forehead! |
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06/11/2006 08:01:20 PM |
| Beautiful image. I like the red scarf. |
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06/11/2006 01:07:22 AM |
Ok keeping it real here. I really like the process done to the model. But front leg seems out of touch and place. Seems painfully out of shape with the remaining subject and dark compared, even though the other foot is light. The spotlight effect works real well but the crop IMO is to tight to justify an empty rooms theme. I'm not saying it does not meat the challenge but what I am saying is you didn't show me enough to get the feel of an empty room. If you could of taken the picture with a wider angle of the room and the spotlight effect on your subject as you have done I feel it would of reduced the front leg issue and opened up the photograph to give me the feel of an empty room. I also wish the title would of said something more about the picture than just the models name. I feel she has something on her mind as she stares upward. A different title may have given a better picture to viewer relation emotionally.
Overall a good shot that could of been better without the tight crop showing more of an empty room. The processing is great on the model but the venting is a little strong. Good Job and wish you well in the challenge. 6 |
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06/10/2006 04:32:10 PM |
I like this pose. She is sitting there under the spotlight looking up at whoever is looking down at her.
I'm not a fan of selective desat; I find the red drape distracting.
Finally, I don't see much of the room. If I were selecting photos for a "objects in empty rooms" show, this is not one I would pick. |
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06/09/2006 07:39:17 AM |
| Great angle and use of colour. |
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06/08/2006 03:09:09 PM |
| This si a porttrait rather than the one thing in an empty room. I'm afraid your scores are going to tank |
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06/08/2006 09:25:34 AM |
| There is no indication that this is an empty room - just a person sitting on the carpet. |
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06/07/2006 09:24:07 AM |
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06/06/2006 08:57:15 PM |
| Good angle for a portrait, but I do not feel the emptiness of the room because such a small part of it is shown. The title doesn't refer to the theme either, so it's hard to make the connection. |
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06/06/2006 08:01:30 PM |
| I don't see an empty room here. |
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06/06/2006 07:00:53 AM |
| interesting idea, but doesn't really give me much sense of 'empty room'. lighting's a bit harsh on her face. |
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06/05/2006 11:23:52 PM |
| I don't get a sense of an emtpy room. |
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06/05/2006 09:58:44 PM |
| Very nice studio shot and beautiful model. Unfortunately doesn̢۪t convey empty room for me. Just 6 and good luck. |
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06/05/2006 08:22:54 PM |
| Oh Dear this is way to contrasty and the pose is very awkward, I think you need to diffuse or feather the light source or at least it needs 2 stops less exposure IMHO 3 |
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06/05/2006 07:05:09 PM |
| Very nice, but I wish this same shot would show the rest of the room... |
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06/05/2006 05:39:25 PM |
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06/05/2006 02:42:36 PM |
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06/05/2006 02:21:26 PM |
| Interesting portrait but does not tell that the room is otherwise empty. |
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06/05/2006 02:14:10 PM |
| Lovely model. Her face it just a bit too harshly lit for my liking. The pose is unique, however the strange angle of the left foot on the bottom is distracting. |
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06/05/2006 11:48:45 AM |
| not sure if it fits the challenge of an empty room |
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06/05/2006 09:46:49 AM |
| Great image. I would count this as 2 "things", the person and the scarf. Plus I don't get much of a sense of the room. This will probably do well anyway. |
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06/05/2006 08:44:12 AM |
| I like the lighting and single sat of red, but I don't get the sense of an empty room. What if you backed up and had her in the corner, so we could see the walls and lack of furniture in there? Just a thought. |
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06/05/2006 01:30:55 AM |
| A little elegant for an interrogation room, aren't you, Pretty Lady! |
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