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08/03/2006 12:15:36 PM |
| Yeah, definetly like the PPed version better - the lighting here is too bright for the gown IMO, and the model doesn't look comfortable/ready. |
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07/02/2006 05:12:55 PM |
| I think overall she just looks too posed, too un-relaxed. Sometimes music helps with this. Sometimes just talking to them prior to hitting the shutter. It's a great outfit and the girl is really pretty. Have you tried shooting her outdoors? |
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07/02/2006 03:58:12 PM |
| The color looks really good here and the lighting as well but maybe a bit too bright? Perhaps that's just because I saw your other version first, which I liked. Although the lighting here does fall on your model's face better producing less sharp edges. I also like how the model is looking towards the camera. However, the pose in general doesn't work as well for me as it did in the other version. I don't really know why that is. Maybe it has to do with this being a color version and it feels more upbeat and the stoic pose doesn't quite go with that? Ok, I think I'm rambling now. :P |
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