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06/26/2006 05:53:07 PM |
Hello from the Critique club, my name is Jon Rowe, and i will be looking at your image this evening :)
Composition/Lighting : great job! i really don't see how this did not turn out better, but be proud of it. it's a great shot. the lighting is spot on, i like the angle of the light you chose, he's shooting up, and brings the eyes to the outside of the frame. very nice. no blowouts, very nice. overall great :) i gave it a 7:)
Challenge : i think it definitely meets the challenge, but some voters don't spend enough time to fully analyze, and i think that shows here. great shot :)
Conclusion : there's really not that much i can nitpic on this. great use of lighting, great detail. nice look of anticipation and concentration on the boys face. really tells a story, which is hard to do in a setup shot w/ kids, as i'm sure you've found.
i think the toga is a bit much, personally. but to each his own. doesn't take away, great image :)
Keep on shootin!
Good luck on your future challenges:)
-Jon Rowe |
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06/22/2006 11:06:05 AM |
"Oh, couldn't you find a better frame. The subject is very good but I hate the overexposed left side."
apparantly I did find a better frame, than you by far. You should mind your comments when your own job is clearly lacking in the same subject of critisism that you project to others. 32nd -> 131st. I do like alot of your other photos in your portfolio though. |
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06/20/2006 03:46:13 AM |
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06/19/2006 08:52:36 PM |
Nice shot, like the composition!
Good luck in the challenge! |
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06/18/2006 11:53:35 PM |
Nice one, great lighting. |
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06/14/2006 09:07:39 PM |
Very nice, clean shot. The "toga" looks staged though, I think more natural clothing would improve the picture. |
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06/14/2006 04:35:22 AM |
Missing the foreground frame - background subject. But nice shot! |
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06/14/2006 01:02:31 AM |
I don't believe that this is what the challenge demanded. |
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