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06/24/2006 10:28:50 AM |
Hello from the critique club,
A very creative shot with a cool title. The moon behind the unlit streetlamp gives it an eerie luminosity that makes you look twice. I like the composition with the negative space filling the bottom and middle of the frame. It gives the image a great sense of height.
I like the way the perspective distorts the vertical line of the street lamp. I might have exaggerated it with a little more tilt and having the lamp meet the bottom corner of the frame. Other than that, I can't think of much that I would suggest to change this.
I think your score probably suffereed because the 'shadow' is not obviously the subject of the image. I think this should have scored higher.
CHeers,
Liza |
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06/18/2006 12:41:05 PM |
Nice -- I'll have to try that. |
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06/15/2006 10:01:43 AM |
Challenge: SHADOWS III
Description: Creatively capture a shadow
Advanced Edit
lunar eclipse
Fit: Clearly meets the challenge 1
Aesthetics: Well composed, aesthetically pleasing 2
Technical: Technically OK 1
Could have done with some better relief on the lamp post
Wow: Real impact 2
I like this shot but could do with more tonal variation
Total Score = 6 |
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06/15/2006 06:46:54 AM |
Well done....are those little stars. |
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06/14/2006 09:23:53 PM |
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06/14/2006 03:33:40 PM |
Perhaps my monitor needs adjustment as I see no shadow in this image. |
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06/14/2006 01:03:49 PM |
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06/14/2006 07:49:52 AM |
Is this really a shadow? Good idea though... perhaps same concept but different challenge. |
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06/13/2006 11:22:09 PM |
i spent a minute trying to figure out how this was done and i've got nothing. unless it was some kind of lightsource that looks like a street lamp pointed down and we are seeing it from the top. interesting silhouette |
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06/13/2006 03:09:38 PM |
Simple, in fact, too simple... without the title it would be almost unexplainable, IMHO. Sorry, not a winner. |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
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06/12/2006 11:21:38 PM |
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06/12/2006 02:30:09 PM |
Hmm - more a siloutte than shadow? |
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06/12/2006 11:16:07 AM |
This looks more like a silhouette than a shadow. |
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