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07/21/2006 09:37:19 PM |
Since you were nice enough to mark my last comment as helpful, I'll give a real comment on this one.
I'd probably take out the light pole in the back. I think it would still be okay, even with a phantom light source at the back- might even be the moon, who would know. In addition I'd probably play with levels a little, go for a little overall darker and tighten up the contrast a little. I like the framing, nice shot, fairly moody as is (hazy night?) Just some of my personal opinions.
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07/06/2006 11:56:19 PM |
| I think the contrast on this one could be improved just a tad, but I love the composition of all the benches and the noise of the photo. Very nice. |
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06/12/2006 07:57:01 PM |
| i like the point of view here, and the foggy nature of this. very nice. i'd clone out the horizontal line at the back of the photo though i think thats whats drawing my eye back there and away from the bench. |
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06/11/2006 06:43:57 PM |
Nice shot and effect but the subject is not strong enough to hold my attention. My eyes want to keep going toward the light. Maybe some dodge on the bench would help. Still a good shot with nice focus and composition.
Keep up the good work.
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