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06/25/2006 11:05:08 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Very cute. The strong framing here was a plus with voters. However, the blown highlights and the low contrast held this back, IMO. I know this is a sepia image and you are not going to have true blacks but the low contrast coupled with the highlights probably gave voters the impression that these things weren't technical mistakes and not done on purpose. I do like the low contrast look you have here so maybe avoid the clipped highlights especially that area on the right corner.
As for the composition, I like the choice you made here i.e. the cropping and positiong the focal point off-centered. What I would have liked better would be for her to be looking at the viewer. However that probably wouldn't be an easy task getting her to look and capture her licking her fingers.
All in all a good entry and an even better keepsake. |
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06/18/2006 05:42:31 AM |
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06/18/2006 12:52:37 AM |
Great composition! I'll bet that took a while to set up just right. |
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06/17/2006 01:22:41 AM |
An oldie but a goodie with the mirror but cute capture :D |
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06/15/2006 10:50:54 PM |
Very good use of framing and i love the spontaneous moment captured. So lovely :) |
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06/14/2006 06:25:03 PM |
Very cute, but the highlights are very blown. |
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06/14/2006 03:20:14 PM |
Great image. Maybe a little more contrast. Takes a while to notice the dad reflection. Many probably won't notice him. Still, great image! |
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06/14/2006 11:33:47 AM |
I really like the tone, and it made me laugh. Adorable picture |
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06/14/2006 01:39:20 AM |
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