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08/03/2007 02:43:09 PM |
| A single piece of chocolate does not really say indulgence to me, a whole box would have been much better. The orange background is too bright and draws too much attention, a more muted background would have been better. The use of flash makes the lighting flat and boring (maybe natural light from a window?), it would also help to have more detail in her hair. The model's pose also looks too 'posed'. If she had not been looking into the camera it would seem more as if she if enjoying the chocolate, rather than merely holding it for a photo. |
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06/17/2006 06:47:29 PM |
| Why stop at one piece of chocolate. Why not have a dozen or so chocolates lying around. Remember Excess is the name of the game |
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06/15/2006 05:22:08 PM |
| Hehehehe....I think everyone does. Good capture. |
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06/15/2006 09:14:56 AM |
| This is good, but the chocolate isnt very prominent. Maybe zoom in right around her fingers and mouth? |
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06/14/2006 03:54:37 PM |
| good composition but use of flash kind of ruins color and adds blown highlights. focus good. |
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06/14/2006 04:40:38 AM |
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