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Challenge: Framing II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Location: Camp Crame
Date: Jun 13, 2006
Aperture: f/5.6
ISO: ISO 200
Shutter: 1/25sec.
Galleries: Fashion, Emotive
Date Uploaded: Jun 13, 2006

 ...and my breath is powerful.
Tw0 words: Last minute. Entry.
11:26. Yeah.

Statistics
Place: 18 out of 261
Avg (all users): 6.4124
Avg (commenters): 8.7143
Avg (participants): 5.8824
Avg (non-participants): 6.6508
Views since voting: 1491
Views during voting: 473
Votes: 274
Comments: 30
Favorites: 3 (view)

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 07/09/2006 11:55:54 AM
This is cool! You seem to be developing a 'style'. I like it. Nice contrast between the mouth and the paper. I like the post processing you've done. Congrats on the top 20 finish!
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 06/25/2006 05:43:29 PM
nice work !!!

congrats on top 20.

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 06/23/2006 08:11:41 PM
One of my favorites from that challenge.. Love it :o)
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 06/23/2006 07:43:50 PM
Congratulations on your top 20 finish with this penetrating image that speaks lucidly.
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 06/23/2006 04:38:21 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Congrats on a personal best. The technicals are all good and most important the idea was a winner. Sorry I don't have any suggestions for improvement since it works perfectly as is.
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 06/22/2006 05:47:36 AM
Hello from Ãlex, CTP MkII

First Impression: WOW, stunning shot.
Composition: impressive, the framing is quite original and centers the focus on your mouth.
Subject: perfect for the challenge
Technical: great: lighting, textures, colors, focus. Everything.
Improvement: not sure about anything could improve it. Just a suggestion, have you tried it in B&W?
Summary: Congrats on your new PB and top 20. I can feel how you're growing as a photographer week by week.

Ãlex

EDIT: spelling

Message edited by author 2006-06-22 05:48:15.
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 06/21/2006 07:05:40 PM
Congratulations on your top 20 finish! Very interesting shot!
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 06/21/2006 10:30:36 AM
This is really nice. I might have liked it better if the cuts and rips were a little more chaotic... Not easy to do of course...

Lots of interesting meaning here. plenty of pairs to complement each other...
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 06/21/2006 08:15:01 AM
Congrats on your pb.. I really like this image..

..kinda reminds me of my outtake from the first "framing" challenge


but your image is better.. ;-)

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 06/21/2006 12:58:28 AM
CTP2 Becky here -
I actually wondered if this was you during the voting... I think this was a fantastic concept. A refreshingly unusual take on the theme. I like the sort of urban grunge feeling, it adds to the sense of being frustrated ad burnt out very well. I think my only critique is that the lighting is a bit harsh on the whites, especially the teeth. It's almost hard to look at. Maybe a polarizer would help tone it down? Nice work for a last minute entry!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/20/2006 03:44:46 AM
loud!
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 06/19/2006 08:29:56 PM
Wow... how creative. Beautifully executed composition. One of the best of the challenge.
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 06/19/2006 05:19:36 PM
different
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 06/19/2006 12:12:20 PM
clever and well done!!
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 06/19/2006 08:32:59 AM
Now this is different! I like it! Looks like how I feel after reading the morning news, lol!
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 06/18/2006 04:52:07 PM
nice - great shot!!
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 06/18/2006 05:22:15 AM
what's on the paper that's making him so angry? -7 :D
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 06/18/2006 02:06:21 AM
What a terrific, original idea!
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 06/17/2006 06:59:36 AM
Bizarre. Nice to see such originality. Keep it up. This is a fun shot, a real eye opener. Title is way wierd but good I think.
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 06/16/2006 11:18:46 PM
A striking image, I hope it does well.
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 06/16/2006 03:08:04 PM
original!
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 06/16/2006 12:23:09 AM
Very creative and very nicely done.
GREAT JOB!
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 06/15/2006 01:36:36 PM
excellent.
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 06/15/2006 06:58:03 AM
Primal scream? This picture expresses frustration brilliantly.
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 06/14/2006 09:22:14 PM
love it - 10
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 06/14/2006 04:09:51 PM
Unusual, dynamic, nicely done.
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 06/14/2006 03:27:29 PM
This is art... I love this... Very nice work ;) No, I don't mean dentist, I mean you ;)
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 06/14/2006 06:36:56 AM
This is nice, only tiny thing is that I personally don't like the over highlighted whites too much. Rest very good!!!
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 06/14/2006 05:44:08 AM
great picture !!
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 06/14/2006 01:19:45 AM
very unique
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