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07/04/2006 10:56:08 PM |
| Not bad...it's just that the photo resembles more of a snap shot than anything else. |
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07/04/2006 05:46:23 PM |
What I like: Composition is good
What I didn't like: Light seems flat |
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07/04/2006 07:27:02 AM |
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07/02/2006 08:07:37 AM |
| not much prep went into this shot. better lighting and a greater depth of field. half of shoe in focus and half out. distracting. |
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07/02/2006 02:43:36 AM |
| Nice work with good details. |
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06/30/2006 02:27:26 PM |
| Lighting really doesn't work very well here. Not sure why you chose to shoot this in the dark with a flash. |
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06/29/2006 11:33:38 AM |
| Lighting is tough on this one. Looks like a simple flash. The image also suffers from a very thin DOF. By the time you get to the top of the sneaker, you are already soft in focus. |
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06/28/2006 06:03:57 PM |
| Looks to me like a snapshot. The lighting isn't especially good. I think maybe a lower angle would have worked better. I think maybe a crack due to a break would have more interest as well rather than one that's just between blocks. |
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06/28/2006 05:58:53 PM |
| a bit too simple maybe. 5 |
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06/28/2006 05:17:41 PM |
| harsh lighting. cute idea. this shoe looks quite similar to another one in the same challenge for the same superstition actually. |
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06/28/2006 02:47:03 PM |
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06/28/2006 01:55:38 PM |
Definately better lightning and focus!
Also, I would've included the entire shoe |
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06/28/2006 11:42:07 AM |
| I can see the crack and the stepping on the crack, but it isn't dramatic enough. I was thinking what if doing a low angle shot to catch the steping on the crack and in the backgroung see a 'mother' holding her back in pain. |
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06/28/2006 10:46:03 AM |
| The central object is a bit out of focus. The image would work better if it had been shot while she (?) was walking thus creating a more dynamic atmosphere. Would be even better to see the foot immediately BEFORE hitting the crack to create more tension: WHEN she steps on the crack, then... |
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06/28/2006 01:09:51 AM |
| Break your mothers back! Would have looked better in daylight, the light from your flash is too flat. |
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