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05/19/2007 06:30:56 PM |
| Which nightclub was this taken? Add the answer to your Photographers notes, if you recall. |
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07/06/2006 11:21:22 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club Cory!
This is a difficult image for me to critique as there is not much I'd change here. Personally I feel that it would've even done better if the voters were more open minded that zoom blur is truly considered motion blur. Heck, it even says so in the challenge description. I like the emotion on the singers face and the upright bass player behind her is a nice touch.
As I said, there is not much I'd change for this exact shot so I'll comment, for future challenge reference, as to what might've got you a better score. Voters here really dig the color - the more the better. They need that "pop" to make them hand out high scores. If this jazz bar had some colorful neon lights behind the singer I think you would've done better. This would've added the "pop" I mentioned, plus neon lights with zoom blur are most interesting indeed.
Overall, an excellent shot that should've placed much higher in my honest opinion.
Thanks for the opportunity to critique this image Cory.
Cheers - Phil |
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07/03/2006 07:22:45 PM |
| Well done on your score for this challenge. I really like this :) |
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07/02/2006 10:05:13 PM |
| yes, you have conveyed music visually. |
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07/02/2006 07:49:28 PM |
| I would like this better with a tighter square crop. The blur at the right and left edges is becoming negative space. |
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07/01/2006 08:10:34 PM |
| Wicked movement to centralize the subjects. |
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07/01/2006 06:47:44 PM |
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07/01/2006 02:59:41 PM |
| Neat. Great job at keeping your subject centered in the zoom. 9 |
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06/30/2006 09:45:23 AM |
| Kind of like this one.. The people I think are perfect, the lights a little disturbing, but.... the challenge is motion blur, so - excellent blur :o) |
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06/28/2006 07:36:52 PM |
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06/27/2006 12:18:08 PM |
| I *love* what's going on with the lights. |
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06/27/2006 06:14:23 AM |
| This does show the frenetic feel of jazz to me well done |
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06/26/2006 11:17:10 PM |
| a lovely pleasing shot...excellent! ...well done, I hope this shot does really well for you |
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06/26/2006 10:15:21 AM |
| The best of its type in the challenge. 8. |
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