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Sailing towards calmer water
Sailing towards calmer water
Kelli


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Glass II (with a twist) (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S9000
Location: NJ
Date: Jun 25, 2006
Aperture: f/5.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 0.022s
Galleries: Emotive, Digital Art
Date Uploaded: Jun 25, 2006

Slight rotate, crop, posterize, levels, hue/saturation, sharpen, saved for web/resized, USM.

Blown glass boat in a kids blow up bathtub. I'm sure this won't score well, but I really like it.

Statistics
Place: 222 out of 258
Avg (all users): 4.4327
Avg (commenters): 3.7500
Avg (participants): 4.1011
Avg (non-participants): 4.5914
Views since voting: 994
Views during voting: 395
Votes: 275
Comments: 12
Favorites: 0


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07/11/2006 02:37:43 AM
There are two things I like about this image: (1) the idea of using color to simulate a storm or rough waters, and (2) the blue colors themselves and the way they fill the whole frame. Having said that, I am not a fan of posterizing and other heavy filters. Here it is particularly tough, because the subject is glass which by its nature is transparent. The posterized treatment comes right through the glass and makes the focal point of the picture hard to discern. With glass, less is more IMHO.
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07/09/2006 11:44:17 PM
Trading POst -
I will be up front and say that most of the figurine type shots just didnt grab my attention in this challenge. I think your shot was too heavily processed. The figurine detail gets lost in the funky tones and textures of the colors in the background. It has a messy feel to it and no real focus. Just distracting in general. I scored a 5 because you did at least try to be creative with your shot where other figurine shots scored less because they were just flat out boring with no creativity. Here you tried but the results were not that good in my eyes. (But I wear glasses so take this opinion for what its worth.)
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07/09/2006 06:35:32 PM
Hmmm...I have to say that this one doesn't really do anything for me. At first I thought you suffered badly from JPEG compression, but I see that you used posterize so that effect was intentional. I'm personally not keen on posterize, but thats just me, I don't tend to like shots that look too heavily processed.

One thing that would really have helped would be if the boat was more obviously a boat - even with the title I'm struggling to figure it out. Also, the composition is very centralized, which makes it much more static
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07/06/2006 12:01:08 AM
Trading Post comment

I remember this one from voting - I thought you achieved the goal implied by the title very well. I suspect the majority of voters didn't like the processing and perceived it as "overdone" rather than intentional. I really like the way it fades to dark on the right - sort of "uncharted territory" in that direction!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/04/2006 01:02:54 PM
Overprocessed with very noticable compression lines.
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07/03/2006 04:42:27 PM
intersting subject matter but the background looks terribly contrasty.
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07/03/2006 02:08:34 AM
nice different hues of blue in your entry, but it seems to be a bit over-processsed.
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07/02/2006 11:53:57 PM
I like the idea you are going for. The glass ship is getting overwhelmed by the strength of the background and so it loses effectiveness.
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07/01/2006 06:28:46 PM
A little blown/oversaturated on the left but does give the impression of going from "stormy" to "calm".
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07/01/2006 11:22:36 AM
Not sure if it's just my monitor, but I'm seeing a lot of pixelation in this shot.
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06/30/2006 03:18:46 AM
Background very distractive.
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06/29/2006 06:36:11 PM
What's happened to the bg colours? Is it a filter or bad compression? The composition needs a little more room at the top and less at the bottom for good balance.
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