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07/04/2006 06:31:51 AM |
I think you've worked the properties of the glass quite powerfully here - both the refraction of the clear glass and the transluscence of the frosted glass. It creates a pleasing effect. The contrast with the red background works well too, as does the fade from bright red to black.
The subject does look just a little "plonked in the centre", though. |
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07/03/2006 07:41:19 PM |
Meets Challenge: 1/1
Lighting: 1/2
Focus: 0/2
Creativity: 1/2
Aesthetics: 1/3 |
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07/03/2006 10:55:50 AM |
| Could use a little more sharpness and possibly some contrast. The lighting makes the swan look a little flat to me. Maybe a tighter crop would work a bit better as well, but that's just me. |
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07/03/2006 02:46:20 AM |
| cute :) the swan seems out of focus and is placed exactly in the center of the image. I like the light |
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07/01/2006 07:31:39 PM |
| In my opinion, this might be even more striking exposed just a bit less and with the swan just a hair more to the right. |
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06/30/2006 11:03:48 AM |
| I like the left side of this photo better than the right side. The lighting is nice and even and the swan has a nice smooth look to it. If you could have gotten even lighting it would have improved the image. I also feel the swan is too centered. |
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06/30/2006 09:07:26 AM |
| not exactly sharp enough or much higher score from me 5 |
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06/30/2006 07:53:33 AM |
| I think you need a softener on the light that hits the image from the left, a bit harsh. Also a different background would have helped the figure stand out. |
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06/29/2006 06:04:30 PM |
| Nice piece of glass. Might have benefited from being better separated from its background? (Darker background, more complementary colour, maybe the swan raised up on something - just thinking...) |
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06/29/2006 10:56:26 AM |
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06/29/2006 10:46:38 AM |
| not bad. would be better with the subject a little off center though. |
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06/28/2006 06:50:34 PM |
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06/28/2006 09:06:53 AM |
| I would like to not see the shadow of the swan. |
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