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07/04/2006 12:47:24 PM |
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07/04/2006 11:19:58 AM |
Composition:2/2
Aesthetics:1/2
Lighting:2/2
Focus:1/1
Personal tilt:2/3 |
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07/02/2006 03:12:49 AM |
Nice place...but you really shouldn't open your umbrella indoors. |
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06/30/2006 11:07:47 PM |
This would have worked better for me with a background the was in keeping with the bad luck theme. 6 |
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06/30/2006 02:27:32 PM |
The background is a bit distracting. The eye leads to the dining room and the first impression I got was that you were having company for dinner. I'm sure that's not what you were wanting to portray. I bet a different crop would have worked better. |
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06/30/2006 02:01:18 PM |
Nicely done. I like the two scenes. |
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06/29/2006 09:46:55 PM |
bad luck to open your umbrella indoors dude! |
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06/29/2006 07:19:18 PM |
I like the sharp focus of this and the lighting is good. The composition of the entry to the dinning room also adds interest in my opinion. |
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06/29/2006 12:18:39 PM |
I really like this. About the only thing that throws me a little is the lines of the door frames are off just a bit. |
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06/29/2006 10:15:16 AM |
It's probably just the bathtub leaking. ;^) Going to need some ceiling repair however.
BTW. Didn't you know it's bad luck to open an umbrella inside!!!
Cute idea. I think the composition would be stronger with less doorway. Put the doorframe on the thirds line. The dining room distracts the viewer... |
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06/29/2006 09:51:01 AM |
Great idea. I think cropping out half the dining room would make a more pleasing composition. 6 |
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06/29/2006 07:08:56 AM |
nice lighting and a good shot overall, well done |
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06/28/2006 10:29:09 PM |
Great picture and nice background |
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06/28/2006 06:23:38 PM |
looks like your door is leaning. Good lighting on the model, but the umbrella has almost no detail in it at all, I would have liked to see some there. |
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06/28/2006 02:52:09 PM |
nicely done. that wall color is beautiful. |
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06/28/2006 02:26:54 PM |
the black against the pink wall is great, but I find the dining room totally distracting. This photo would have been much better with a large expanse of wall behind the subject and maybe just the moulding around the doorway showing- or maybe a small piece of art work somewhere to confirm it was indoors |
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06/28/2006 01:47:23 PM |
Hmm, the composition seems to be a little bit off.
I would've included a little bit of water drops here and there.. |
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06/28/2006 12:35:34 PM |
I like the contrasting colors of this shot |
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06/28/2006 09:28:39 AM |
Im thinking black raindrops or confettie or something. it needs a Visual effect to show 'It's' Raining. other wise this is more along the lines of 'Is it' Raining.
Also, doesn't give me the feel that he is indoors. The lighting suggests outdoors. Even though the doorway looks inside. |
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06/28/2006 08:33:34 AM |
The black umbrella and the wall provide a great contrast |
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