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Dear Mom
Dear Mom
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Stationery (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Location: Manassas
Date: Jul 3, 2006
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: .6
Galleries: Vintage, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jul 3, 2006

 First submission in a long time, long over do. Trying to get back into photography.

Statistics
Place: 16 out of 122
Avg (all users): 6.1307
Avg (commenters): 7.2000
Avg (participants): 5.8793
Avg (non-participants): 6.1956
Views since voting: 968
Views during voting: 390
Votes: 283
Comments: 22
Favorites: 3 (view)

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 07/17/2006 10:25:24 PM
Nostalgia and lounging very well reprented. Congratulations on your top 20 finish.
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 07/12/2006 10:54:46 AM
This and staples were my favorites in the challenge. Good job. I was one of your tens!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/11/2006 08:16:11 AM
How delightfully old-fashioned! Very clear photo in B&W form. Effective use of elements and tight composition. Nice.
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 07/09/2006 09:21:23 AM
Nice B&W. Nice lighting, great contrast. Nice texture on the ruler, paper and the wheel. The ribbon holder may be a bit too much "washed out dead space" and there is a strange square around "Dear Mom", which doesn't look like it belongs, otherwise fantastico! Keystroke in motion is a great adea, even better with slower shutter! Nice!
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 07/08/2006 02:15:31 PM
Apparently you don't have much to say to her. :P (J/K). I like the sharpness here. Great job capturing the paper's texture and not blowing it out. The sides of the typewriter seem a bit too bright but it's not a huge distraction. Also, nice touch going b/w here. The only suggestion for improvement is have more typed on the page. It would have made the image hold the attention of the viewer longer.
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 07/07/2006 07:47:05 PM
I like this. Great that you can see the paper's texture. I especially like that the letter is nearly empty.
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 07/07/2006 03:15:06 PM
Great concept. Love the use of greyscale.
 07/07/2006 11:12:42 AM
What I like: Very sharp w/ a good focus. Black and white works well. Great composition.

What I didn't like:
 07/07/2006 09:19:29 AM
The B&W conversion is very effective and well executed. I wonder how this would look with a little more noise to similute film grain.
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 07/06/2006 11:14:19 PM
I like the contrast in here, it's almost like a still shot of an old film.
 07/06/2006 08:04:08 PM
Very simple. I like it. B/W is perfect for this too.
 07/06/2006 07:05:03 PM
Great! Love the lighting and old typwriter!
 07/06/2006 03:06:14 PM
I think that is a lost occasion. good the idea but with the text far of the head of printer it seems that the photo is "constructed". I think that a more tightened point of view, a better detail on the machine and the text near the head of printer was perfect(in another contest even with a small movement of the head...). Very good your choice for the black and white. this shot provokes in me great imagination...I imagine an ash tray full and the smoke of a cigarette that they knows and a man with the shirt white who writes.....but peraphs I exaggerate.
Best regards 6
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 07/06/2006 06:33:39 AM
Good detail work and an old piece of machinery.
 07/06/2006 03:02:23 AM
Very artistic.
 07/05/2006 05:26:18 PM
Interesting view of an antique :-) and, of course the B&W treatment is perfect. I think it would have been better if it wasn't to "Mom". Pretty impersonal to write a letter on a typewriter. Also, why is there some white box around "Dear Mom"?
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 07/05/2006 03:52:38 PM
Send Money! Needed something different in composition.
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 07/05/2006 11:28:01 AM
So many times we've all started this letter... Wonderful focus, great perspective, fantastic nostagic feel, 8
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 07/05/2006 10:44:01 AM
A nice take on the challenge
 07/05/2006 08:59:59 AM
very good in black and white...nice shot
 07/05/2006 05:24:10 AM
Nice tones and contrast.
 07/05/2006 12:37:13 AM
Nice!


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