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07/13/2006 01:01:37 PM |
I'm not sure on your PP steps, but there looks to be two small issues. One, the big crane looks a bit blown in the lighting, but more importantly there seem to be halos (dark ones) around things. I'm not sure what that's from. It's minor, but it caught my eye.
5.5, in the realm of my critiques is a good score. Probably the biggest limitation was the black background. I normally dig them, but here maybe some additional context would have helped. It was a tough challenge trying to make paper dynamic, and the cranes certainly are a good idea, but the large piece is taken in by the eye but has trouble keeping our interest.
I usually read a ton of 5-6 scores as "technically well done, but doesn't keep my interest". |
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07/12/2006 04:29:11 PM |
I gave you a 6. It just lacked that "punch" of a top score -- maybe if the paper had bolder colors, then it would have been more obvious the cranes were made from the same paper as well. Also the small crane is too small to be appreciated with the limited resolution allowed.
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07/11/2006 05:33:06 PM |
| Better than a couple of other origami shots because it's much simpler. But here, I'd like the swans to be a different color so they pop out from the background paper. |
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07/11/2006 04:19:50 PM |
| Nice origami...like the writing also |
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07/11/2006 07:14:49 AM |
| Does that mean: "paper" or "cranes" or "no birds allowed"??? Unclear, although it could well be stationery. |
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07/10/2006 08:03:07 AM |
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07/10/2006 07:45:09 AM |
| I like it but it looks a touch overexposed, I think the pink would have been nicer with a bit less light on it |
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07/08/2006 03:28:06 PM |
| Nice simplicity to this - I find the light reflecting off the black drop dsitracting though. |
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07/08/2006 12:31:51 PM |
| nice subject, but a little too straightforward. |
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07/07/2006 11:40:52 AM |
What I like: oragami (sp?) is cool, and the light is nice.
What might improve it: Composition may benefit from being less centered. |
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07/07/2006 09:19:36 AM |
| Nice arrangement. I would like to have seen the colors in the cranes a bit more saturated. |
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07/06/2006 08:10:25 PM |
| I think something gets lost in translation for us english-only folks. |
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07/06/2006 02:45:36 PM |
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07/06/2006 06:39:04 AM |
| I don't understand the title but I do know of the magic swan. |
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07/05/2006 01:31:18 PM |
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07/05/2006 10:51:11 AM |
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07/05/2006 12:42:54 AM |
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