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09/02/2003 11:36:48 PM |
Wow this shot is incredible. Composition is really good. Subjects are interesting. The tutor and the yawning girl. The light behind the girl is a tiny bit distracting, otherwise is is an awesome shot. |
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09/02/2003 12:36:01 PM |
Great portrait, works nicely here in b&w. You've captured some good expressions. Lighting works well. Effective feeling of spontaneity. 7 |
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09/02/2003 10:16:55 AM |
Good picture! I like the way the lamp shines on the notebook. The b/w is nice. ~8 |
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09/01/2003 03:03:57 PM |
Study session! The composition and mood of this photo are great. That said, I think your lighting has done you a huge disservice. The light behind the girl's head has dimmed her face and the whole scene somewhat, and brings out a piece of the background to leave us wondering, when I think it might have been better left dark, and nothing to distract us from the studying. At the same time, the foreground light, while it brings out the faces of the subjects well enough, is blindingly bright itself and has glared out all or most details of the book or notebook in front of the boy, and also of his nearer sleeve - you can even only barely see the crease at the elbow.
I think I'd have tried turning off the background light, and moving the foreground light out of the shot and/or finding a softer foreground light. |
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09/01/2003 11:59:20 AM |
Good expressions in this shot. |
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09/01/2003 12:30:17 AM |
good pic...is she yawning? =`) ( works well if she is ) Good lighting. |
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