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07/18/2006 07:49:50 PM |
| somehow that foregrounded piece of glass ties the whole picture together for me. a wonderful collage of color and shape. 8 |
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07/18/2006 05:04:38 PM |
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07/18/2006 05:03:44 PM |
| I like the lighting in this photo, and the oof focus cars add to the scene |
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07/18/2006 11:14:01 AM |
| Bravo! (appaluse) Very nice color and focus is flawless. |
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07/18/2006 10:56:43 AM |
| The broken glass that is out of focus and in front of the whole photo bothers me a bit, kindof an attention stealer but the rest of the shot I like, love the DOF and the coloring in it. 6 |
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07/18/2006 01:45:29 AM |
| I like the colors. Maybe a little too much sharpening? Also a little hard to pick a focal point |
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07/15/2006 06:22:58 PM |
| I like your photo and message a lot but I think the post-editing workflow could have been better. I still give it a '9'. |
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07/15/2006 10:13:20 AM |
| The byproducts of progress - good choice for the challenge. I think I might have preferred a more focused look at the car in the upper right, since the broken pane in the front grabs the eye first, then directs it to that second car. |
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07/14/2006 12:02:39 PM |
| Planned obsolescence certainly isn't progress. Good shot. |
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07/13/2006 11:00:10 PM |
| Love the color tones in the shot |
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07/13/2006 10:22:01 PM |
| I see shat you are doing here, but for me the out-of-focus broken glass in the foregroud detracts. It does give it a uniqueness though. |
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07/13/2006 05:15:31 PM |
| I can almost feel the heat in this scene. The choice of viewpoint is excellent, I like the shallow depth of field and the way the background focus has been handled. |
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07/13/2006 09:59:37 AM |
| I like this shot. Think it would have worked a little better with the focus on the car half way up the right side rather than the one at the bottom, but overall very nice. |
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07/12/2006 06:54:31 PM |
| way cool.. hats off to you... |
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07/12/2006 05:56:02 PM |
| Good idea but the OOF grass in the back stands out a lot. I'd also have moved that glass thats sticking up in the front. |
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07/12/2006 12:17:58 PM |
PPPFFT...
No, this is what we call over sharpening. Okay all kidding aside, this is a great shot with a great theme, I love your choice of DOF. The pane of glass in the foreground of the shot IMHO takes away from the leading lines you have with the cars, I would re-shoot without the pane of glass and you would really have a wonderful shot. And yes, I would tone down the un-sharpen mask a little, there's a lot of haloing in the body lines of the background cars and grass reeds. Good eye and a wonderful shot.
Message edited by author 2006-07-21 18:02:28. |
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