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Frozen Delight
Frozen Delight
KHolt


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Challenge: Abstract Food (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Sigma 24-70mm f/2.8 EX Aspherical DF for Canon
Location: Front doopstep, Halifax
Date: Jul 16, 2006
Aperture: F/13
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/125 sec
Galleries: Macro, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Jul 16, 2006

As I'm sure a few people did, I popped down to the supermarket and decided on a couple of fruits that I thought would be good colours to contrast with frozen green beans (the frozen bit was my decided 'creativity'). I plumped for pomegrantite and guava. Unfortunately, they were both useless, when I opened the guava it was almost white (not what the appealing packaging showed), the pomegratite just looked a bit too slimy in the photos. So I dug out some raspberries and blackberries from the freezer and these were much more pleasing to the eye. Put on 2 kenko extension tubes and fired off a load of shots on my doorstep in the sun.

Cropped, rotated, shadow/highlight, hue/sat, auto contrast, auto levels, curves, USM and resize and final USM then saved for web.

Statistics
Place: 71 out of 199
Avg (all users): 5.7476
Avg (commenters): 7.6667
Avg (participants): 5.4940
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Views since voting: 1306
Views during voting: 297
Votes: 210
Comments: 8
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07/30/2006 02:25:50 PM
Hello and greetings from the Critique Club!

This is an image full of colors and texture. It certainly is abstract, and I find it lovely and engaging.

I like how you've used various diagonals here, which give the photo some dynamism and increased interest. The colors also work well. The red in the middle is framed by the berries at upper left and corn (?) at left.

Your depth of field creates an area of sharpness right in the middle, then it slowly tapers off. It might be more evocative to decrease the depth of field by adding some more drastic blur. At F13, that's a small aperture, and it might be fun to experiment with a larger one. Often, blurry areas seem to help the mind go beyond the photo, as it were, and think of profound things....that's the thought behind it, anyway. In any case, your choice here isn't enthusiastic either way, so we have a sharp area and an area that's not sharp, but also not very blurry. Sorry to make a big deal out of this, but with no negative space to speak of, it would be nice to experiment to see if you can either create some negative space by adding blur, or make everything perfectly sharp. Starting to ramble. Sorry!

Your sharpening here shows some good skill, and this is a difficult photo to sharpen with all those white ice specks.

I also love the various shapes and textures here--it really is a good offering for an abstract with so much to look at and experience.

Nice work!

David Sidwell
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/22/2006 08:01:01 PM
Quite lovely.
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07/20/2006 10:21:42 PM
Superb macro. Love the textures here.
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07/20/2006 09:15:14 PM
sweeeeet!!!! Love this picture. Great color and idea.
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07/19/2006 05:44:40 PM
berrrrrrrrrr....this is bumpy and cold...I love it!
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07/17/2006 06:59:40 PM
love it it may need more contrast but it is gorgeous 10 10 10
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07/17/2006 05:26:08 PM
nice textures,and color.
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07/17/2006 12:49:42 AM
excellent macro, great colours
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