Howdy and greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a bright, vivid image that is simple and effective in its communication.
I imagine that this would have scored higher if it were more, well, abstract. But outside of that, it's a fine image.
The red apple is well placed in the frame, and you chose the colors well. I can also appreciate your lighting, which adds a bright, cheery glow to everything. The fruit looks appetizing to be sure!
It's an interesting concept to have a screw going into some fruit. To be even more clear, you might try using more familiar or "archetypal" tools, like a screwdriver instead of the bent screwing tool you have here.
The cropping is also good, since it implies that the scene goes on and on.
So nice work and it looks like a fun shot!
David |