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08/03/2006 05:12:41 PM |
---Greetings from the Critique Club!---
First impression - Neat idea!
This is a great idea for the challenge. I commend your creativity and executing your idea.
The composition is good, as is the lighting.
To say what would have made this score better, I think it needs some sort of context. With the stark white background it appears to be floating in space. I think if you would have set this up with a bowl of dip, or used a table as the background, you might have done a bit better. 5.58 is a good score, particularly with the competition here at DPC. Put as much thought into the setting as you did the idea and your score would have been high, IMO.
I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
David
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07/30/2006 12:48:02 PM |
Looks like you found the golden-bag of pretzels! Does that mean you get a tour of the pretzel factor? ;) Nice picture. |
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07/29/2006 11:20:36 PM |
Heh. I was wondering whether anyone would shoot this subject. :) |
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07/28/2006 12:26:53 PM |
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07/24/2006 07:52:54 PM |
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07/24/2006 12:51:31 PM |
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07/24/2006 11:05:18 AM |
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07/24/2006 11:01:41 AM |
Very clever and nicely done. |
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07/24/2006 04:34:05 AM |
I wonder what they would be worth???
nice idea and well done |
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07/24/2006 01:53:14 AM |
Cute. Very well thought out. |
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07/24/2006 01:35:01 AM |
Meets Challenge:2
Aesthetics:2
Technical:1
Wow:0
Originality:1
Total Score:6
Thanks for painting them. |
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07/24/2006 01:33:21 AM |
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07/24/2006 12:41:50 AM |
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07/24/2006 12:32:15 AM |
I thought that waiting for challenge results was bad, you had to wait for paint to dry. I think that the lighting and focus is great and the framing is great. |
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