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08/03/2007 07:45:42 PM |
Great concept. I believe this image would have scored much better with a little refinement. Some more light on the jacket would stop the suit bleeding into the background (at least it does on my monitor), maybe some back-lighting. The whites are a bit dark and could be brightened up with a levels adjustment. I do not like the yellow colour from the lamp you used, I would prefer the white balance set to remove it. I would have cloned out the two bright spots between the hands. The image is a bit too tightly cropped at the top, I would maybe leave some room for the 'head'. |
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10/02/2006 12:27:15 PM |
The light is neat the way it highlights the keys right at where the hands are to go.. Perhaps a little more light to define the suite from the background would of helped this do even more better.
All in all a fantastic composition.
I love piano..
:)
Piano World Forums are awesome.. |
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09/24/2006 08:32:56 AM |
Hi Hassan ,
I choose this photo because it was different and original , very funny.
Thanks for your kind words !
(This is a translation of the comment made by my mother , thanks for posting nice thoughts for her) |
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08/01/2006 09:40:10 PM |
i think some backlighting could've made this a little sweeter, just enough to see his outline |
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07/31/2006 09:52:48 AM |
Excellent idea.....totally with the theme :) |
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07/30/2006 02:24:48 PM |
Different, interesting shot |
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07/30/2006 10:20:16 AM |
very creative, I like the way you did this, especially that you went that extra step to get some of the keys depressed. 8 |
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07/29/2006 10:24:37 PM |
Clever, and fun. A different pose would be more effective, I think, but a fun and cool idea :) |
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07/29/2006 08:53:24 PM |
Good idea, and the shirt collar hanging in space is eye-catching. I just wish the whites were truly white instead of being so dark. Maybe that's to hide what's holding up the clothes? |
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07/29/2006 04:37:19 PM |
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07/28/2006 08:18:24 PM |
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07/28/2006 01:57:42 PM |
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07/27/2006 10:57:46 PM |
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07/26/2006 10:09:47 PM |
I've seen sevral keyboards...but your added dimension of the 'player" makes it the best...so far |
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07/26/2006 03:22:19 PM |
I would've liked to have seen this image a little lighter and with the wrists straight like he is actually playing the piano. But other than that, I applaud your originality. Nice Job. |
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07/26/2006 02:13:16 PM |
nice idea.. did you tape the keys down? the only detail i notice is inside the sleeve it looks like paper showing. otherwise very awesome. |
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07/26/2006 01:49:11 PM |
the idea is excellent, but you still have to work with the technique, anyway, you have creativity |
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07/26/2006 12:55:37 PM |
Great Job on putting this together. |
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07/26/2006 11:57:37 AM |
Creative and well executed. Bumping to an 8. |
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07/26/2006 09:41:06 AM |
I think your trick would have been a little more convincing if his sleeves weren't resting on the piano. It also needs a bit more lighting and a sharper focus. I'm sure you put a lot of work into setting this up, though, so good job on that. :) |
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07/26/2006 07:41:24 AM |
Clever idea. This could have really jumped out with better lighting and setting your B/W points to get truly crisp whites and blacks. Keep at it - it's ideas like this that will pay off for you in the long run (at least for DPChallenges anyway). ;^) |
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