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08/05/2006 02:46:26 PM |
** Critique Club **
Greetings!
its a very well composed picture, the colors are nice.
subject: the bee looking away from the lens doesn't make it. doesn't add interest. Also the dof is very shallow. It does help in the smooth bokeh, but makes majority of the image out of focus with subject, not to catchy.
I would have framed it tighter so that I avoid the out of focus flower ( keep it some, but not all ) which will also bring more attention to your subejct. at this time the pink color of the flower draws a lot of viewer attention which you don't want.
if you have any questions, please feel free to pm me
thanks,
Gaurawa
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07/31/2006 03:22:58 AM |
| I don't mind the fuzziness but then I take alot of fuzzy pictures. I liked it and saw past it to what you were going for. A 7 that was well earned. Well done! |
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07/24/2006 02:29:11 PM |
| A little muzzy for a macro shot |
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07/24/2006 01:29:29 PM |
| I would have voted another angle on the bee higher |
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07/24/2006 03:50:02 AM |
| I think the flower should be in more focus and I think it's a little overexposed. I don't like the burnt out threads in the flower. The composition and the lighting are very good though. |
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07/24/2006 12:44:08 AM |
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