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08/14/2006 11:05:18 PM |
| Nicely done, great composition & perfect subject for this challenge fyi 7.... |
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08/14/2006 09:14:29 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club,
Hi Claire,
I've spent some time looking at your shot trying to work out what I can comment on it. For soem reason this isn't easy. The shot is technically sound - nothing wrong there. Even the general composition is okay - admitabely a little full of clutter, but given the challenge that is to be expected.
The issue I think is to do with what the lines of the steel convey in terms of emotion and leading the eye. Somehow these factors just don't 'work' here. I have found the following article very useful in starting to understand this aspect of photography. Hope it helps you too.
//ronbigelow.com/articles/adv_comp/adv_comp.htm
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Cheers
Paul |
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08/03/2006 05:48:38 PM |
| Interesting, but a little bit too busy maybe. |
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08/02/2006 01:48:18 AM |
| tie wire pieces. that's different. |
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