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08/17/2006 03:48:07 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club.
First impression: Flying water and fun!
Technicals: Technically this image looks good. To my eyes the focus looks sharp and colors are clear. Tough lighting and it provides good impact with the brightly lit water droplets.
Composition: I agree with one of your commentators. A slightly off center crop would strengthen the image. IMHO, a little more above his head would also give the picture more dynamic strength. It just needs a little more context.
Post Processing: You made nice work with the tough lighting conditions. Your sharpening system seems to have worked rather well too.
Good score in the challenge, anything approaching 6 means you struck a cord with some of the voters.
I̢۪m not an expert so PM me with any questions or comments. Keep shooting!
Mark
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08/11/2006 09:41:27 AM |
| Cool jump! He's getting up there. You've caught the action at the pivotal moment is seems. Water is nicely frozen - maybe a little hot but not bad. The jetski is well focused and I'm not sure how you could have composed this any differently for better impact. Should do ok with this. Good luck. |
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08/11/2006 06:50:23 AM |
| nice idea, but a bit too soft. |
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08/10/2006 06:50:22 PM |
| Great stop! Try placing the subject off-center for a bit more drama. |
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08/08/2006 12:31:31 PM |
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