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08/17/2006 09:42:26 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hi Billy,
Congratulations on a lovely shot that will no doubt be a great memory for you (and the grandparents). There is a wonderful sense of motion here (stopped of course). I can almost feel the angst and glee of the kids - in that sense the shot is very effective at conveyign this emotion.
The kids expressions are what make this shot so you would have done well to push that. A closer crop, and maybe a bit of contrast and sharpness around the faces could have brought this out a bit more. I would suggest you crop the top, left and right to compose your subject in the top third of the image - centrally composed subjects such as this generally look a bit flat (although not always).
I think you have scored well here with what some might regard as a snap-shot - that is a testement to the character of the shot. Well done.
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Cheers
Paul |
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08/11/2006 02:53:53 PM |
nice idea, but a bit soft and loose. if you were in tight on their faces, you would have had a killer shot. |
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08/08/2006 10:39:08 PM |
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08/08/2006 05:41:29 PM |
Nice hair! :-) Good capture, focus, colours and timing. |
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08/08/2006 01:25:19 PM |
Love the hair! How many times have you heard that? It's the first thing I noticed when the image came up. Cute pic. Too bad you couldn't get a nice rooster tail behind the tube or something to add a little punch. May be a bit underexposed (seems like the whites could be brighter)? Good luck in the challenge. |
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08/07/2006 06:38:31 PM |
Love the way the hair stands up in this shot. You should trade the bertha in on a Kite tube though. Lots of fun with insane air that will really make for some good action shots! Great capture! |
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08/07/2006 04:39:42 PM |
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08/07/2006 02:45:13 PM |
This made me laugh! GREAT HAIR-DO's! :)
very cute. |
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08/07/2006 01:43:08 AM |
love the hair - thats very funny! |
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