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08/21/2006 12:16:12 PM |
Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice shot! My eyes went to the spider, the bottom right corner along the bottom and then back to the spider body
Composition:
I like the balance of dark and green. Top left dark balances with the bottom right dark area. The spider balanced by the green area in the bottom right. I think I may have changed the angle slightly to see more of the spider body.
Subject:
Meets challenge, but does not come across as an obvious “looking up” shot.
Technical:
I like the lighting and colours. DOF is really shallow. Would have been nice to have more of the spider and web in focus. You didn’t mention cropping. If this was out of camera placement, well done.
Summary:
Nice capture and colours. The lack of obvious “looking up” and the shallow perspective on the spider may have hurt your score. Voters usually don’t spend a lot of time figuring out what they are looking at. Good luck in future entries!
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08/15/2006 09:21:24 PM |
| A very cool photo! I like it. A very liberal interpretation of the, "from the ground up" challenge. It will be interesting to see what the voters will think. Good Luck!! |
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08/15/2006 05:16:08 PM |
| Part of the challenge of showing somethign from the persective of the ground up is actually showing that the persepctive is from the ground up. I give benefit of the doubt that you were standing underneath this bug and shot upwards but the angles of the web strands, the fact that there is a fly on the right hanging 'down' - all these things really give the impression that this was pretty much shot straight on horizontally. Little more DOF would be nice to make out more of the web. Hard to make out anything on the spider itself other than the yellow blob on the back. Overall nothing to really interest the viewer here or move the eye around the shot. Biggest drawback though is the perspective thing. Good effort. |
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