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08/16/2006 10:16:49 AM |
I love the tableaux one sees through subway windows. My suggestion here would be to emphasize the two seated women who are looking at each other. That is the most interesting (emotional?) element in the photo. I would consider giving up the window-as-frame idea and crop closer to the pair.
Message edited by author 2006-08-16 10:17:04. |
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08/14/2006 09:48:14 AM |
Shiny, happy, people .. nup! |
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08/13/2006 11:35:50 PM |
Would have been nice to see her eyes as it would have added a bit more emotive feel to the shot IMHO... |
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08/13/2006 10:04:51 AM |
shot could have been a bit clearer |
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08/11/2006 05:35:19 PM |
Cool idea - great portrayal of a transportation mode without actually depicting it literally. |
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08/10/2006 06:58:17 PM |
Being able to see the subjects eyes might have made this strong. The two seated women are looking at each other, perhaps in conversation, with the third woman standing over them. Unfortunately, we can't see any of their eyes. |
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08/10/2006 02:26:55 AM |
The bar across the ladies face rather spoils this one for me? |
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08/10/2006 01:24:47 AM |
If the window didn't clip the girls face I would like this picture a lot more. I like it for the composition, especially the old man looking down (wonder what he is looking at???), but I can't get over the clipped face. |
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08/09/2006 09:37:10 PM |
Nice photo. Reflects the everyday transportation :) Have you tried B&W? 7 |
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08/09/2006 09:23:38 PM |
Nice idea but little too muddy...on topic, though |
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08/09/2006 08:51:26 PM |
Been here - done this! Gotta like the photo! |
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08/09/2006 10:45:25 AM |
great idea. but i miss seeing the faces. i would try again with getting 3 folks looking out the window in b&w! |
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