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08/22/2006 12:14:52 PM |
Hi! HereĂ¢€™s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Nice shot!. My eye went to the runner, over to the trees, down to the sky and then down the building skyline.
Composition:
Nice framing with the trees. I really like the arch effect. Find the amount of dark trees distracting. I would consider cropping the three trees on the right. This would draw more attention to the runner.
Subject:
Meets challenge
Technical:
Nice DOF and focus. I like the details and colour in the sky and clouds. Very effective lighting on the distant buildings. Green a little bit oversaturated in the trees to the right.
Summary:
Good eye to put this picture together. Not sure about your scoreĂ¢€Â¦may have been the imbalance between dark/light and your subject. Voters donĂ¢€™t spend a lot of time looking at the picture, so 1st impression is important for their initial score.
Good luck with future entries!
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08/14/2006 10:44:14 PM |
| Nice composition. A little to dark for me. |
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08/10/2006 01:55:19 PM |
| You found the perfect location for this type of image and I put this in my top 10. |
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08/10/2006 11:14:31 AM |
| Nicely New York there. The sky is interesting - we have been lucky of late with that. |
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08/09/2006 09:49:26 PM |
| I don't like the idea legs, but I love the view. Don't ask me why, when I think transportation, I would like to see a man-made vehicle rather than feet or legs... anyway, 7 |
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08/09/2006 04:51:15 PM |
| The framing and colours are nice in this photo, but the runner seems overwhelmed by the other elements of the photo. |
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08/09/2006 08:37:05 AM |
| The sky is the best exposed in the photo and it seems at it were the subject. |
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08/09/2006 07:15:02 AM |
| the blue in the sky really pops out - great job |
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