This is a magical image. I absolutely love the smooth metallic feel to the water and then to have the moonrise and some stars visible in the sky? Excellent.
I'll echo a few thoughts already mentioned by other commenters. First and foremost level out that horizon. It'll make a huge difference in the balance of the image. Hopefully it won't cause you to crop out that bright star on the left but between a level horizon and the star, the horizon wins.
Also the balcony ledge is adding a yucky grey tone to this image so that should be cropped out, and really the beach's brown tone though nice doesn't seem to fit the cooler hued, more darkness intense duality the sky and ocean have. I'd crop that out completely as well.
What that will leave is a fantastic play of two elements, the ocean and the sky, both have some nice dark qualities, the ocean offers a strong base, some fabulous smoothness, a metallic sheen and that wonderful moon reflection line. The sky then let's this image breathe, lightens things up just a bit and helps enhance the expansive feel of the ocean. Not to mention the hint of clouds in the horizon and upper corner and also those wonderful accents - the stars.
Typically I think it would be nice for the moon to be more detailed and less a ball of white, but here I think with how well the dynamic between the water and sky work, the moon is much more of a secondary player, there to help enhance the mood of the two elements rather than play first fiddle. Of course, were the moon to have some of the clarity and focus that are evident in the other moon photos I saw in your portfolio that would proabably elevate this image even more.
I keep scrolling the image to ensure I examine everything but I have to say I love how it looks when I crop out the bottom portion. I think you could also safely crop out a bit of the sky and still keep the same dynamic - since the sky is much more prevalent than the ocean you have some room to crop. But I would caution not to crop too much because the ratio of sky to water is one of the backbones that gives the shot strength. I'd say no more than 3/4 of an inch of the top.
I think this is a great capture and with just a bit more fussing it can shine even more, but you've done an excellent job getting a great starting point. |
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