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08/28/2006 03:13:41 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club!
I think this photo was a good idea but I think the execution could use a little work.
First, I think this photo is pulled down with all the dark and drab colors in the background. Nothing really pops in my opinion. The image seems too busy and my eyes just go all over the place, only to lead back to the piles of peas depicted on the can.
Second, the use of your elements along with someone else's picture on the can is sort-of making this image fall short of the mark. The angle is unimaginative.
The focus is really sharp though. With a little more work you could have a really great image.
That's just my two cents.
:) |
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08/21/2006 11:14:12 PM |
OK pic. I wonder how many points you'll lose for the corniness factor... |
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08/20/2006 04:05:29 PM |
would have worked better with maybe some crust baked around it. |
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08/19/2006 09:34:58 PM |
If we were rating the titles this would be right up there. |
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08/19/2006 04:45:05 PM |
The straight-on view is your biggest enemy here IMO. A more interesting angle/composistion would help enormously. |
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08/18/2006 01:35:58 PM |
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08/18/2006 12:16:08 AM |
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08/15/2006 05:04:19 PM |
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08/15/2006 02:18:27 PM |
that is verry clever, at first before i read the title i was confused but then i read it and i couldent stop laughing! |
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08/15/2006 01:12:23 PM |
Nice pun! Execution has its ups and downs. The "smoke" is great. |
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08/15/2006 08:24:44 AM |
that's funny! good colour...wish you could see thee d peas a bit better |
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