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08/29/2006 06:57:31 PM |
::: Critique Club ::: [The Saj]
First Impressions: Cute...funny....but something is definitely fishy about this photo...
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Composition: The composition is good. I like the dimensionality it delivers. I do feel you needed just bit more on the bottom. The female model's outfit has a knot tied to her top that get's cut-off and kinda distracts. But other than that, good comp.
Subject: Fun subjects. Cute sexy female. Very expressive male. And well...a fish. There is a button that the male model is wearing that greatly distracts IMHO. But that's about it.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light): Okay, this is where I've got to knock the photo a bit. The colors are bright the blue works nicely, but the faces and skin tones come across far to red. Perhaps some selective de-saturation of the reds.
The lighting fades nicely. And does well with the shadows. However, there is a lot of noise and I feel the image could be sharper.
Creativity: Definitely points on this one for creativity and humor.
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To improve?: Focus and color processing.
Summary: Fun shot, I scored this a 6.
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It is my hope that these insights are helpful, and constructive. If you have any questions regarding this critique, please feel free to PM me. Also feel free to PM me with any feedback on this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so.
- Jason "The Saj" |
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08/20/2006 07:57:33 PM |
You're so weird... I didnt know you were actually going to post this when you told me about it, lol.
Was that fish from our freezer???
--Laura |
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08/19/2006 08:46:21 PM |
| Why would that guy not want to kiss that beautiful girl!?! He is stupid for that! Great idea, and image. |
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08/19/2006 03:45:35 PM |
| Would have liked sharper focus. Otherwise fun, and nicely done! Characters are excellent, esp blue dude. |
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08/19/2006 01:32:35 PM |
| Nice interpretation! Great job! |
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08/18/2006 05:54:16 PM |
| Lacks sharpness - although I feel this is deliberate? |
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08/18/2006 02:49:39 AM |
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08/17/2006 11:40:04 AM |
| Here I appreciate more the creativity and expresivity than technique. Very nice work. |
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08/16/2006 11:03:17 PM |
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08/16/2006 10:23:29 AM |
| too funny and yes stupid! the look on the guys face is killin me, LOL. Good Luck! |
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08/16/2006 08:44:47 AM |
| umm, yea. Just a hint of vignetting,and a bit too much contrast I think, but an excelent idea. |
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08/16/2006 06:08:52 AM |
| that's funny! lighting isn't the best, but a quirky shot, so well done |
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