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09/07/2006 10:33:34 PM |
| Nice cute capture here. Just doesn't hold enough intrest for this challenge. |
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09/07/2006 01:14:52 PM |
| This would be better cropped portrait or with the subject offset more. Also, the visible metal supports in the background are a distraction. You need a less transparent backdrop or dispense with the backdrop and have the background look industrial. As for the model, the stare is reasonably sexy, but the eye make-up is over done and dark patch on the cheek makes her look somewhat sickly or malevolent. Also, the flyaways in the hair look unkempt instead of sexily rumpled, as I expect was the intent. As for the lack of shirt front, it doesn't hurt the shot, but it isn't really adding that much to it either. A style of shirt and pose that gave some hint of curves instead of simply showing cleavage would be more enticing. |
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09/05/2006 04:31:27 PM |
for me, the background deducts a point.
sorry. |
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09/05/2006 01:53:39 PM |
| Don't care for the lighting bouncing off her face. |
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09/05/2006 12:25:27 PM |
nicely executed. I'm not too sure about the background...either it should be industrial or not...there just isn't enough shown to keep my mind from staring at the background. Hmmm...not sure if I could suggest anything though (sorry that I am one of those people that cry about something with no alternative...I hate that).
Regardless. Wonderful concept and the image is still striking. Great job. |
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09/05/2006 10:45:57 AM |
| that's one hot momma...love the background! 10 |
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09/04/2006 02:31:43 PM |
| Great work, excellent subject! |
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09/03/2006 06:05:57 AM |
| The background is a bit distracting imho. |
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09/02/2006 06:30:16 AM |
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09/02/2006 01:35:34 AM |
| This is not a very flattering portrait. She's very pretty, but unfortunately she looks like she just got out of bed or something. The lighting on the face is a bit harsh, and the background is distracting. |
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09/01/2006 11:14:04 PM |
| IMO a more portrait crop would have made this photo stronger,and the nice model more forward in the photo...6 |
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09/01/2006 05:29:43 PM |
| sexy stare, sexy model, sexy pose... |
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09/01/2006 04:32:58 PM |
| ohhhhhhh. your not kidding. very sexy. lighting a little harsh but still beautiful. |
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09/01/2006 01:03:28 PM |
| Beautifull model and a great portrait, but the backgroud doesn't fit with it. |
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09/01/2006 10:30:16 AM |
| What a pity about the background - it distracts and for me, detracts. |
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