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09/11/2006 09:10:14 AM |
** Critique Club **
As you pointed out, the horizon is titled. this can be fixed easily by rotating the picture and cropping. Which software do you use for edits ?
You have some great subjects in the picture, but you didn't capture them well. they occupy lesser area in frame and the viewer is distracted to ther other elements in the picture.
What to do: in this particular picture, you could have gone closer, taken a shot from lower angle to capture the guys with sky as background, you will be able to fill the frame with the boys and have a colorful background...
if you have any questions, feel free to pm me
thanks,
Gaurawa |
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09/04/2006 04:42:34 PM |
| The waterline should be straight. Nice colors in the sky. |
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09/04/2006 11:05:56 AM |
| I like this as a photograph. The cluster of figures is interesting. I think I would have toned down the brightness of the sunset over the mountains and on the water. |
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09/01/2006 09:06:42 AM |
| As sunset photo it would be nice but silhouettes of people are too crowded. Also with so little light its hard to get them more in focus. |
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09/01/2006 07:19:15 AM |
| The horizon is really leaning |
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09/01/2006 05:02:35 AM |
| The color and silhouettes are nice but the horizon in not level. |
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08/31/2006 09:29:21 AM |
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08/30/2006 07:52:29 PM |
| Very nice altough a lil dark |
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08/30/2006 03:34:20 PM |
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08/30/2006 02:47:05 PM |
| This looks like really good fun! |
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08/30/2006 02:21:55 PM |
| you should have cropped the blurry part on the right side and rotate the picture a bit so that the horizon would be perpendicular. Otherwise, it's a good picture with nice colors. |
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08/30/2006 01:58:23 PM |
| full of energy...good shot! |
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