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09/11/2006 09:32:51 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hi Darren,
Welcome back to DPC.
I love the feeling this shots conveys. For me at least it is a very effective shot. I personally really like both the sky and the sun peaking out of the boys pocket. I'm guessing you were at the wide end of your lens - very nice.
This would have got a 7 or 8 from me. Why not a 10? I'm not a huge fan of the central subject and the large swath of negative space below the kids. So a different composition would have won me over. Would that have increased your overall vote? Hard to say - take a look at your comments peopel are divided on whether or not they like your placing of the sun.
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Cheers
Paul |
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09/04/2006 11:21:25 AM |
| love the sun peeking out of his pocket..well done... |
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09/03/2006 09:10:32 AM |
The sun "in" the boy's pants spoils it for me.
Other than that, it's a good shot. |
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09/01/2006 03:25:25 PM |
| Very nice photo. Nice textures(sky,clouds,water and black forground) A little less sun and the kids a little further apart.(so you can see a more distinct holding of hands) |
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09/01/2006 05:19:10 AM |
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08/31/2006 02:14:59 PM |
| I can barely see the color of the girl's shirt, but I still can. It does meet challenge, but that's going to take a point off or so. I love the color of the clouds, and the ocean is nice and level. The placement of the sun is great. I like the placement of the objects; very good. It gets a little dark on the top of the image, though. I don't think I like that... of course, this was a basic editing one, so you couldn't burn that section... |
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08/31/2006 09:28:11 AM |
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08/30/2006 07:35:18 PM |
| Would have loved the sun in the middle |
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08/30/2006 03:13:53 PM |
| Well done, great light, comp., and exp. 9. |
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08/30/2006 01:56:22 PM |
| The boy could have covered the sun |
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