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09/14/2006 04:36:56 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Focus and depth of view are very good.
Color, saturation, hue, and lighting overall ae done well.
The clouds may be just a tiny bit overdone. They are to the point where they are beginning to compete with the subject.
The person in the background adds scale to the piece which helps, but with the dark clothing and background the placement is distracting. The posing of the person makes the photo look a bit more like a snapshot than a thought out piece. The mid-stride position here is not the most flattering. Perhaps putting the person on the dirt or grass on the far side of the water would help. In this way, the person would not intterupt the flow, yet still give a sense of scale.
As it is, this is a very good picture, and a little scary for the safety of the person so close to the action.
Nice job!
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09/05/2006 11:28:04 AM |
Nice colors and nice composition. |
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09/04/2006 03:01:41 PM |
Very unique and perfect for the freesytle challenge. |
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09/04/2006 11:50:55 AM |
the person walking is distracting ... nice photo though |
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09/03/2006 06:57:05 PM |
Okay, I absolutly love this but....... this is an advanced editing challenge. Can't you remove the tourist? |
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09/03/2006 06:38:05 PM |
At first I thought the person should be in the shot, but at second glance, i think it adds to the magnitude of the size... cool shot! |
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09/03/2006 01:46:25 PM |
Now that is wild! Love the clouds! 9 |
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09/03/2006 10:27:08 AM |
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09/02/2006 11:17:46 AM |
Great landscape, interesting foreground that seems like it's about to explode. |
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09/02/2006 01:41:52 AM |
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09/01/2006 12:29:34 PM |
Slightly crooked, or the person is walking leaning slightly to the back... |
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09/01/2006 10:22:06 AM |
cool. nice prespective given by including that person. 7 |
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09/01/2006 01:47:57 AM |
Stiking sky over a colorfull composition |
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09/01/2006 12:14:30 AM |
Haloing on the hills-sky outline. Compositionally, I think this is not effective for me. |
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