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09/11/2006 11:53:58 PM |
This is really neat and makes me wonder what the model is thinking about or looking at. I'm surprised it scored so low. Pose is good.
What I would do to improve it is to crop quite a bit off the sides to put the focus more on the model's head. The blinds are begging for attention and it's slightly blown out on the top end of the blinds. If you set exposure for the bright background you may have gotten the silhouette without the blownout area. |
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09/08/2006 02:16:27 PM |
Jeanne,
I meant to leave a comment shortly after the challenge winners were posted. Two small suggestions. First, try cropping off the left window entirely. Second, bump up the contrast a tad to make the silhouette effect stronger. Give it a try and let me know what you think.
Tim
Message edited by author 2006-09-09 18:44:40. |
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09/05/2006 07:05:13 PM |
| This picture would have been better if the person was standing more to the left in the picture so the light would have surrounded him?? |
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09/04/2006 11:00:50 AM |
| Good tension and interest in this photograph. The lines of the blinds, windows and sheer curtains contrast nicely with the dark figure. |
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09/03/2006 09:06:53 AM |
| A little bit of straightening would have improved this picture a lot. |
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09/01/2006 07:16:48 AM |
| I'm afraid I cannot clearly find a point of interest. |
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08/31/2006 09:16:27 AM |
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08/30/2006 12:49:48 AM |
| I like the concept but it feels too busy for my liking >.< |
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