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12/18/2006 07:28:59 AM |
| Despite the poor setup, horrible lighting, overall bedroom amateur porn feel and your other attempts at wrecking this - the girl still manages to look good. |
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12/16/2006 08:49:31 AM |
| this shot would be great without all of the distracting information in the background. and a simpe nude. the strip-tease doesn't do her body any justice from an artistic standpoint. |
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12/15/2006 08:19:26 PM |
| doesn't really seem as though the lighting/set was put together with any real thought, though this model is smokin hot and please please use her again lol |
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12/05/2006 10:19:14 PM |
| There is too much in the composition which distracts from the subject. To me, it smaks fo Porn as opposed to art. |
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09/05/2006 06:01:38 PM |
Obviously a very attractive model, the biggest problem for me is the shadowing on her face, which doesn't work, IMO.
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09/05/2006 05:28:55 PM |
| I'm thinking the "blur" is a bit of camera shake. Not that I blame ya for that though :-) |
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09/05/2006 05:16:57 PM |
I'm not sure if you were trying for a soft focus or not, but I'm not sure it works with how dark this is. However, your model is very atractive.
I do have a couple of observations her panty strap is twisted. You might want to clone out the shadow of the light in the lower left. You also might want to consider getting the background to be just the fabric and not include the wall. The dark item she is kneeling on is also a distraction. Along with the seem by the light shadow. Her shirt is bunched up, that works, but she's got her skin right below it on her side and back bunched up as well, it doesn't look very complimentary.
I don't want to sound too negative, I jsut see a lot of potential with this. |
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