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09/30/2003 02:51:09 AM |
| Don't quite see the connection to the theme, but maybe that's just me. Would have cropped more off the right. |
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09/29/2003 02:11:16 PM |
| Good lighting, I like the detail. |
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09/29/2003 11:20:49 AM |
| Nice lighting. Is it my monitor or are the tones a little flat - could the black be blacker? the face is nice but the cropping of the neck is awkward. Your negatice space is well balanced. Also I think all the leading lines lead OUT of the picture - when the viewers gaze is led to the edge of the frame, his mind says "Done, next picture". The longer you can get your audience to look at your image, the better your score will be. There are details that will be missed on a quick glance. That's why leading lines are especially important in a contest like this where most people are speed voting. The curl of haor on the left leads out. The statues gaze, if I follow it, leads off the bottom. There is an unattractive dirty line of her collar that strongly leads out. |
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