I like this well enough, seems a little cool on the white balance, but that might be intentional. ?
I think that framing this so that her face was directly in front of only th grill would help, and keep the bright line of the hood from crossin her head. Uusally it would be better to have a cleaner backgound, but this is a pretty cool one. I think to heighten the effect some grunge processing, lightly applied, could help to grit this up and make the truck/prop fit in better.
There's not much to be said for leading line here, the re-framing would help, and skewing the angle some more so that theres a nice diagonal toward her face to lead the eyes. The headlight becomes a distraction so close to the edge there. Better to get her closer to one with just a bit of separation between it and her head to preserve the scene information and make it more in tune with the rest of the comp.
A strand in front of the eye can be a good thing and add some character, a full lock of hair is too much, especially when it covers the Iris. |
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