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09/25/2006 03:38:56 PM |
Critique Club Review
There are some nice shapes here. The lighting is a bit low, and contrast a little soft.
If this had been taken to extreme contrast where it was almost all white and all black, it would make for increased drama in the piece.
Interesting composition, and focus/depth of field are fine. Just needs more punch. |
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09/16/2006 03:30:38 PM |
| whiter whites would give this more contrast and make it stronger IMO 6 |
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09/14/2006 05:16:48 AM |
| Good elements, composition, and b&w, but IMNSHO it could be sharper. |
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09/13/2006 08:50:39 AM |
| Nice lines and curves, I like the angled composition. |
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09/13/2006 12:35:23 AM |
| Not bad as abstract, but the contrasting is a bit dark and grainy with things a little flat and no texture. |
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