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09/19/2006 03:12:01 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Focus is good.
Color, saturation and hue are good as well.
The positon and angle of the tree leads the eye out and off the top left of the frame. The overly large ornament competes for attention. If the story being told is that the ornament caused the crash, then the debris around the tree is OK. I assume the tree is not being discarded, at the title tallks about being too soon.
The red backdrop postioned where it is, leaves exposed white wall that also is distracting. There isn't enough there in this view to really tell us that the tree caused the wall to be exposed.
The picture is nice and sharp, and you did a good job with the depth of field. |
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09/13/2006 03:01:26 AM |
| naw, mate; this doesnt work for me |
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09/12/2006 03:43:59 PM |
| typo in the title...ideas OK for the challenge, but for a great photo you overdid the accessories. the tree is lost. the quality is also hurt by the droppings and stuff at bottom of pic. |
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09/11/2006 11:34:17 AM |
| That's one way to solve the hard-to-find aspect of this challenge. Ball is on the large size, I think. ;-) |
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