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09/25/2006 09:17:30 PM |
Critique Club Review:
Meets the challenge. Focus and depth of field are good. The triangle on the left distracts a bit. Perhaps because it is not in line with the other lines in the picture.
The pencil lines lead the eye, but come together off the image, thus leading the eye out of the picture.
The big problem for me, is there is no real center of interst. The eye just kind of wanders around not knowing what you wanted to really show. A more dramatic lighting might have helped. I'd have to agree this angle made things look a bit flat. |
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09/17/2006 07:27:35 PM |
| my eye is drawn to the blues |
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09/15/2006 07:15:40 PM |
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09/13/2006 08:16:29 PM |
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09/13/2006 02:10:55 PM |
| Good composition although the lighting looks a bit flat. |
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